Moriah Leila

Hey there, I don't have a ton of time, so I am going to skip the nitpicks and just get right to the big stuff. First off, your dialogue can ...

I love it! As I read your poem, I had this mental movie playing in my head and I think that is so great, that you were able to create ...

I like it. I can imagine myself there in the rain, wishing to write something deep and meaningful. But it just comes out as a mess of words staining a ...

Hi! Sorry it took me so long to get to this, but here I am, as promised. Thank you so much for breaking this down into pieces, it is much ...

Sorry it took me so long to get to this, life kind of happened! Anyways, I just wanted to say that I looooved it! My gosh, I wish I was ...

Sorry it took me so long to get to this, I guess life just kind of happened! Anyways, I have to agree that you should pursue this. You made me ...

Hi! *waves* I'm going to review this, okay? I really liked this line: Red is one hundred roses, Each carved of stone. The imagery is just so powerful! While your ...

Hello, I am your reviewer for today! I wish I had the time to get into all of the nitpicks, but I don't, so I will just do an overall ...

Well it was definitely irregular. And your argument was pretty weak. However, I am not so sure your idea works in this poem. Even with it being irregular and free-style, ...

Hello! *Waves* I am going to be your reviewer today. First of all, I like the plot line, it seems very intriuging. However, this chapter is very rushed. It often ...

I really like this poem, which is why I pushed the "like" button. I think you did paint a very vivid picture of the desert wanderers. Sometimes it felt like ...

I have to agree that this poem is amazing! I love the way you put a spin on the genre of love poems. And it told a story, which not ...

Well, I for one, have to disagree with everyone's critiques. I thought this was a lovely poem! I think you really brought something new to the love genre, as I ...

Okay, evidently there is no pattern to your rhyme scheme, and when you do rhyme it feels very forced (i.e. me/thee) I would say you would do better to just ...

I have to agree with Kat, in that you brought a freshness to the genre of love poems. Except that you killed it with the "You drive me crazy" part. ...